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The Adventures of Korron Zeria Part 1: The Pearl

Yes, I know, I'm a Blog-a-holic.

Anyways, on the Bogging term of service, under the things we're allowed to post I saw this:

"Fan fiction and or artwork that you or a friend created"

And, well, I was already full of ideas, and I just wrote the first in what I hope to be a series of short stories about my main character.

I hope you guys like it. Feel free to comment! In fact, please comment! Big Smile

Anyways, here is The Adventures of Korron Zeria Part 1: The Pearl


 

            Korron slowed his speeder to a halt, in the desolate canyon ahead stood the infamous Krayt Dragon, and judging by its size, this particular one was practically ancient. Krayts never stopped growing in their lifetime, so the older ones got huge.

            Bigger than most ships.

            He looked at it from behind a nearby rock, wishing he had a camera. But that was not why he’d come to the Krayt Graveyard. He’d come for one thing, a pearl. A Krayt Pearl, to construct a new Lightsaber. His old one had worked okay over the years, but only that…just okay. His new one would be better…much better…and a Krayt Pearl was a key component.

            Korron reached out to the force, in order to better concentrate. This was not going to be easy, fighting something that big. He cleared his mind of any doubt, and ignited the blade of his current saber.

            The Krayt didn’t seem to notice the sound, and didn’t even notice Korron charging at him until he got about fifty meters away, turning to bare its teeth angrily at him.

            Some of them were larger than he was.

            It pulled back one of its front feet and clawed at Korron, who barely managed to duck out of the way in time to see it opening its huge jaws. Korron swiftly rolled in between its two front legs and ended up underneath its belly. He slashed his blade across it, and the krayt screamed in obvious pain, but it was so large, the blade had not done any serious damage. Furious, it stepped to the side and whipped its tail at Korron, who, distracted by the painfully loud screech, couldn’t get away in time. The force knocked Korron back into the sand nearly twenty meters away, his lightsaber another five behind him.

            The Krayt turned at him and charged, giving Korron no chance to retrieve his weapon. He jumped to the left of the Krayt and launched a serious amount of force lightning at its ribs. The Krayt let out a minor squeal. Once again, Korron couldn’t manage to penetrate its extremely tough hide. He had one thing left to try.

            The Krayt turned around to face Korron, who made no attempt to escape, but instead unleashed another barrage of force lightning, this time aimed at the dragon’s face, in particular its eyes. The Krayt screamed louder than the first time, clawing furiously in Korron’s direction, but without its sight, came no where close. Korron continued, relentlessly, until the large creature fell, numb, to the ground, its open jaws a few meters in front of Korron. The lightning had shredded its nervous system.

            Korron allowed himself to fall back into the sand, taking a deep breath to relax. He couldn’t help but smile. Hold on a minute. He told himself. You’re only half done…

            The smile faded. He stood up and stretched his right hand, his saber flying into it and igniting.

            Here comes the “fun” part.

            Actually retrieving the pearl…


 

So what'da you guys think? Feel free to tell me! (I need some good comments if it is bad so the next one wont be. Stick out tongue)

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----Korron

Comments

 

Bawlz said:

Great stuff. Keep it commin'. Doesn't sound like a light side Jedi. I can tell ya that.

January 31, 2007 8:48 AM

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